
Deja Vu
Words 174
She had been about 6 years old.
They said a war was on.
They pasted brown paper on windows.
When the siren went off, ights were switched off.
They huddled in the darkness and spoke in whispers.
She thought it was a game.
Until the day the siren went off and Father wasn’t home.
“Where is Father?”
“Switch of the lights quick. He will be home soon.”
There was darkness all around.
She peered out of the window. But she couldn’t see a thing.
Father! Come home quick. What if a bomb falls on you?
Unable to control herself, she slipped out into the deserted street.
A shadow moved.
Was it Father?
God, please let it be Father.
Her first prayer ever.
The shadow coughed – a familiar beloved cough.
Her heart leaped. Delighted, she skipped back home before he could scold her.
Father was coming. He was safe.
She stood looking out into the dark deserted street.
If she stood long enough, prayed hard enough, would Father again emerge from the shadows?
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Written for Flash Fiction for Aspiring Writers – a story in 175 words or less. Thanks to Priceless Joy for hosting and Maria for the photo prompt. To read the other stories on this prompt click here
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Great story! It kept me on the edge of my seat. Such a sad ending!
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Thank you PJ for your visit and comment.
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My pleasure!
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I forgot to add, Welcome! We are happy to have you join the FFfAW challenge.
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Thank you PJ 🙂 I have participated earlier but unfortunately not as consistent as I would like to be.
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I thought that you had participated before but wanted to welcome you again since it has been awhile.
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That’s really nice of you 🙂
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I really am happy you have participated again!
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Me too! Always a pleasure to be able to rise to the challenge 🙂
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LOL! That’s very true. 😀
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I can see this with a few tweaks a timeless piece. It has great imagery
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Thank you Michael 🙂
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I completely agree with Michael. This piece has great imagery.
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Thank you YS
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Lovely and full of drama, well done.
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Thanks Iain 🙂
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It’s heartbreaking in its simple and innocent tone. And to think there are thousands who through this everyday breaks my heart even more…
Anyways as always – another beautiful story.
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🙂 Thank you 🙂
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Shadows gave hopes and shattered them too…felt sorry for the little one…loved your narration too
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Thanks MM
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