Ground Rules
Words 200
“Grandpa, how did you get that scar on your chin?”
Grandpa rubbed his chin. “Ah! I am rather proud of this one. I once chased a chain-snatcher. I lunged for him and fell on my chin. I grabbed his ankle and held on until the others came.”
“Wow!”
Grandpa looked pleased.
“And the one on your forehead?”
He caressed it. “This is both my badge of shame and pride.”
“Interesting!”
“Once Mother lost her gold ring. She accused Leena of stealing it.”
“What did Granny say?”
“Leena denied it. But nobody believed her.”
“Not even you Grandpa?”
“We were newly married. I hardly knew her.”
“Then what happened?”
“There was a slanging match. Accusations flew thick and fast. Leena was rude to my mother. As her husband, it was my duty to teach her a lesson. I slapped her.”
“No!”
“Your Granny instantly retaliated by hitting me with a saucepan.”
Shocked, I could only stare.
“Blood dripped from my wound but all I felt was a sense of vindication and pride. I looked at my parents. I hated that Father hit Mother. But what I hated more was that she didn’t hit back.”
“Did you ever hit Granny again?”
“Never.”
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Written for the Sunday Photo Fiction – a story in 200 words or less. For more stories, on this prompt, click here
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For readers of Moonshine, here's Chapter 96 and Calvin and Dad
“I hated that Father hit Mother. But what I hated more was that she didn’t hit back.”… Powerful!
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Thanks! Oh what a joy Joy! 🙂
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ha ha ha che sbarazzine queste nonne, bel modo per smitizzare halloween
giorno felice
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Grazie mille 😉 😀
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Side effects of husband trying to be a “teacher” 😉 Loved the honest Grandpa…amazing the way you have capsuled so much in 200 words…
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😀 Thanks so much dear MM 🙂
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Learnt behaviour and a cycle broken. A good story Dahlia.
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Thanks – loved the photo 🙂
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An eye for an eye proved to be a stinging eye-opener and left an indelible mark on him, saving him from the tag ‘like father, like son’…. what a lesson!!! Wonderfully written!!!
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Thank you !! 🙂 🙂
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While not condoning the violence, I did enjoy your story.
Well written, with a moral and some humour.
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Somehow your comment (perhaps the initial bit) made me smile 😀 Thanks a lot for dropping by 🙂
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Great different take on the prompt, and a good moral story. Well Done.
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Thanks so much Iain 🙂
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I would never have thought that Frankenstein’s monster can look that cute 🙂
Excellent post.
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Funnily enough the moment I saw the pic, it looked like a Grandpa! 😀 Thank you for your kind comment 🙂
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Good for Grandma. Good for Grandpa for admitting to something he was ashamed of. Good writing, Dahlia. 🙂 — Suzanne
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Thanks so much Suzanne 🙂
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That was simply marvelous! I know nobody should hit/abuse anyone but it was great to see how the saucepan smack made an impression on him. Kudos to his wife.
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Yeah tit for tat often gets the message across 😀
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Truer than True.
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More power…loved it to the core.
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