The Battle for Supremacy
Words 99
“Wow! What a swanky home.”
“Thanks.”
“You don’t seem too pleased?”
“It’s okay.”
“You have your eyes set on a palace or what?”
“If I could, I would go back to our old ramshackle haunted house.”
“Haunted! Weren’t you scared?”
“Terrified. But that was the only house we could afford.”
“Yet you would go back?”
“It was the best of times. We were together.”
“You still are!”
“Doesn’t feel like it. Back then we were a team. We ganged up to fight our common enemy – ghosts, poverty, whatever.”
“And now?”
“We have graduated to individual sports – the ego games.
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Written for the Friday Fictioneers – a story in 100 words or less. Thanks to Rochelle for hosting this challenge and Sarah Potter for the photo prompt. To read the other stories inspired by this prompt click here.
Thanks for reading – have a great week 🙂
Powerful one, Dahlia… So sadly true of so very many couples/families
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Thanks Dale for the encouragement.
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I can feel the hegemony tension all over..
PS: love the way both text/pic fit 🙂
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Thanks for reading and your kind comment 🙂
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I agree, the hard times and difficulties do bring people together. Comfortable living does not happiness bring.
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Thank you!
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Nostalgia for hard times and being haunted. Sometimes remembering the “good old days” is better than living them.
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True – the Golden era is never the present era! Thanks for reading 🙂
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Powerful message! I especially like the last line about graduating to individual sports. Ego games can destroy any relationship.
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Thank you! Glad it struck a chord
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My pleasure. 😊
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kya baat hai
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Aap aaye yehi baat hai!!
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Hey that one was so relative, cant find a better word, i identify with each and every word you wrote, yet memories can create a havoc at times……lovely, master of words…..
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😉 😀
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Well written, we so often don’t see how happy we are with less and it’s not wealth that makes us happy
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Thank you Michael 🙂
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Dear Dahlia,
Times of hardship can bring people together. Comfort and the abundance of possessions can drive them apart. Well done.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thanks Rochelle 🙂
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Truly a story about the difference between a house and a home. I don’t know about the ghosts, though. Good writing, Dahlia. 🙂 — Suzanne
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Thanks a lot Suzanne! 😀
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The title, the pic and the message those 99words created gelled perfectly well
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Thanks so much 🙂
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Don’t things always look better in hindsight?
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Hindsight is definitely useful for telling us how we could have done better! 😀
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Man. That was a sad one. The last parts/lines of your stories always hit the bull’s eye.
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Thanks 🙂
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