
Mired
Words 195
He rocked on his heels as he took in the picturesque scene.
Not a blade, not a ripple out of place β just the way he liked it. Streamers and balloons heralded his arrival but what he liked best was the trumpets blaring his entry. He frowned, he would have to make it clear, he didnβt much care for the pink stuff β he was after all a man.
He squinted into the distance β what an eyesore!
βHey you! Get out of the way. Canβt you see Me coming?β
βGo on ahead. I am not in your way am I?β
βYou bother me just by being! Get the hell out of here.β
βHow would you manage without me?β
βHuh! Are you crazy? What do you do – except clutter the place?β
βTo me it looks as if you are the one blocking the pathβ¦β
βYouβ¦you nobody! How dare you speak to me like this? Donβt you know who I am? With just a twitch I can blow you out of existence.β
She snickered. βSure you can.β
βAre you challenging ME?β
βChicken.β She thumbed her nose at him.
βHow dare you? Charge!β
Smirking, she edged towards the riverbank.
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Written for Sunday Photo Fiction – a story in 200 words or less. Thanks to Alistair Forbes for hosting and C.E.Ayr for the photo. To read the other stories inspired by this prompt click here
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It reminded me of my childhood days…the fight I have with my cousin over everything…silly stuff now that I think back…lovely piece…
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Thanks Mayuri π
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“Not a blade, not a ripple out of place β just the way he liked it.” – nice!
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Thank you π
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Haha I like that. I imagine he will be explodingly furious when he becomes beached.
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Great dialogue, Dahlia. He sounds like a Type A personality. Good writing. π — Suzanne
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Thanks a lot Suzanne π
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Really loved this one! In a way, it reminded me of current happenings in the political scenario of a certain great country π
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Phew! Exactly what I was (apparently rather unsuccessfully) trying to portray – so thank you π
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che bella!
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Grazie mille Annalisa π
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My mind did go WW with regard to the context but glad to be back on the right track now π
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