
When it is Not Time
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“Time!” The conductor called.
Passengers trickled out the roadside joint.
“Time!” He banged the bus.
Stragglers hurried.
The driver revved the engine.
“Wait! My daughter is in the washroom.”
“The mountain roads are treacherous and it’s getting dark.”
“Please wait just 5 minutes!”
“Take the next bus.”
The bus began rolling.
Protesting, the man exited with his luggage.
The bus roared away showering him with dust.
“Papa! Our bus…”
“The Royal Highnesses. Always late. My rotten kismet.” He alternately cursed them and bemoaned his fate.
Until news came – their bus had fallen into a gorge.
There were no survivors.
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Note: Based on a ‘real’ incident I heard as a child.
Written for the Friday Fictioneers – a story in 100 words or less. Thanks to Rochelle for hosting the irresistible challenge and Roger Bultot for the photo prompt. To read the other stories inspired by the prompt or add your own click here.
Thanks for reading – do let me know your thoughts 🙂
A lucky escape for them, fate was on their side. Nice one.
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Thanks 🙂
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Much like the stories of those who were late for work at the World Trade Center towers on the morning of September 11. You can refer to it as fate or divine intervention. I prefer the later. Good story.
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Yes even I like to think it so – Thank you for reading 🙂
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Dear Dahlia,
Russell beat me to it. However for me it’s personal. Our daughter in law worked in the World Trade Center. She was 15 minutes late for work. Thank God! Love your story.
Holiday Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thank God indeed 🙏 Happy holidays Rochelle 🙂
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A lucky break there. Well done.
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Thanks 🙂
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Sad! Great write.
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but lucky.
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Yes – thank you for reading 🙂
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One of those moments where you start believing in the existence of something beyond you …something which need not be sensed by any of your physical senses to believe in…
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Yes – I was but a child when I first heard a similar incident and has stayed with me since even during my staunchly atheist days 😀
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How lucky to have bad luck on this day
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Yes! Nice way of putting it 🙂 Thank you for reading.
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Just fantastic!!!!!! I loved this….excellent message/moral of the story….wonderfully written….you get to the point so quickly, with all the satisfaction of a detailed and thorough story…thanks for sharing 🙂
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Thanks for reading Truly and your lovely comment 🙂
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It only takes a minute (or second) to change fate. You caught that beautifully in your story.
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Thank you for reading Alicia 🙂
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A pleasure!
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That happens far too often. Very sad. Good writing, Dahlia. Happy New Year 2017. —- Suzanne
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Thank you Suzanne! Wish you a fantastic Happy New Year too 🙂
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There is some good in bad. That is what the elders say. Nice take on the prompt.
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Thank you Inderpreet for reading and commenting 🙂
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