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It was the first thought that came to her as she woke up. He was gone. And, soon, this bedroom, the house in whose eastern corner it sat, and the tiny garden outside with its gnarled old red hibiscus and the half-grown mango tree they had planted together, all those would be gone as well. It was the strangest feeling ever. by Jaishree MisraΒ (For more about the contest/rules click here).
The Christmas Present
Daddy wasnβt going to come home ever.
It was the first thought that came to her as she woke up. He was gone. And, soon, this bedroom, the house in whose eastern corner it sat, and the tiny garden outside with its gnarled old red hibiscus and the half-grown mango tree they had planted together, all those would be gone as well. It was the strangest feeling ever.
Rhea closed her eyes, trying to shut out the present, the past, the pain. But no matter how hard Rhea tried, the memories came flooding back. Her hiding in the dark, pressing back against the shadows, stifling her scream, of her fatherβs low menacing growl, βAre you hiding in here Princess? I can hear you breathing.β
Rhea clapped a hand over her nose but it was too late. A hand reached out and plucked her out.
Rhea squealed and protested even as she threw her puny arms around him. βNot fair Daddy! If I hadnβt got a cold you would have never found me.β
βWell, thatβs your fault isnβt it my little Princess?β Jason pulled her button nose as he strode off with her in his arms. βRemember what the doctor said? Itβs because you donβt eat properly that you keep falling ill.β
βOh but I do eat! Do you want me to eat like an elephant?β
Jason laughed. βBut that doesnβt mean you eat like an ant!β
βDaddy do you know how strong ants are? They can carry load up to 50 times their weight.β
Jason put her down and got down on his haunches beside her. βAre you 6 years old or 60?β
Rhea sighed and put her hands on her hips. βHow would I know Daddy? I was just a baby when I was born wasnβt I?β
Jason cracked up.
βCome on Daddy, itβs your turn to hide now,β Rhea pulled him.
Chuckling Jason got to his feet. βLater. First have dinner.β
βNo! First you hide.β
βAfter dinner, I promise.β
βYou are cheating!β Rhea walked off in a huff.
Jason caught up with her. βCheating?β
She looked at him knowingly. βYou are trying to trick me into eating arenβt you?β
Jason clapped his hands together and bowed. βYes Granny!β
Please and flattered, Rhea condescended to nibble at her food. βMummy, after dinner you also come and play. Itβs my turn to be the den.β
Gia smiled and pinched her cheeks. βMaybe if you finish all the food on your plate.β
Rhea rolled her eyes. βNot you too!β
Gia looked at Jason, whose shoulders were shaking. βBeware Gia, thatβs not your daughter. Thatβs my Granny β isnβt it?β
βYes!β Rhea frowned and tapped him on the knuckles with her spoon. βCome on now, eat your food quickly. Wash your plate and donβt forget to brush your teeth.β She dropped her serious veneer and giggled into her hand.
Warm rich laughter erupted and broke over the clatter of cutlery.
It was her turn to find Daddy. She hunted for him high and low, upstairs and downstairs, outside and inside but he was nowhere.
βDaddy? Daddy! Daddy!!!β She woke screaming.
Gia held Rhea close as she blabbered. ββWhereβs Daddy? Why doesnβt he come home? Is he angry with me Mummy? I promise I will eat up everything Mummy, just ask him to come home. Tell him that I lost the game Mummy. Please Mummy.β
βShush my darling shush. Itβs okay dear. He has just gone on a long flight, somewhere very far.β Gia wiped her face and consoled her. βYou know he is a pilot right? It happens that sometimes he is gone for days on end? Well this time it is just taking longer than usual.β Her voice broke and she turned away to hide her emotions.
βBut why are we staying at Grannyβs house? When are we going back home? What if Daddy is home? What if he canβt find us?β Rhea was getting hysterical and Gia had no answers. She couldnβt bring herself to tell Rhea the truth – her beloved Daddy wasnβt coming home ever.
βSoon sweetheart, soon.β Gia mumbled as she rocked her to sleep.
βDaddy will come home for Christmas wonβt he Mummy? Will you tell Santa I donβt want any gift for Christmas? Just that Daddy should come home.β
βYes darling.β
But days passed as did weeks and months but there was no sign of Daddy. Rhea stopped asking about him but she continued to wait for him, starting with every car that turned the corner, every knock on the door, every ring of the telephone.
And then one day, Gia stowed their bags in the car and said, βCome letβs go.β
βWhere are we going Mummy? To Daddy?β
βHush. Itβs a secret!β
βWhereβs Granny? Arenβt we going to say bye to her?β
βSheβ¦Sheβs busy.β Gia hurried her into the car.
βOh!β Rhea squealed in delight as she spied the red blooms of their hibiscus, βWe are home! Daddy, Daddy!β Rhea tumbled out of the car and stopped short.
A stranger stood at the door.
βCome Rhea, come in and meet your new Daddy.β
Rhea stared at the tall man. He wasnβt at all like her Daddy. She didnβt want a new Daddy. She wanted her old Daddy.
βDidnβt I tell you that Santa always listens to good girls?β Giaβs voice was shrill.
βWho is that?β
βThat?β Giaβs laugh was forced. βThat is your new brother Ron. Say hello to him dear.β
Rhea looked at the scruffy grumpy boy standing a little off. He ignored them and stared determinedly at the PSP in his hand.
Rheaβs eyes swung back to her mother. βAm I going to get a new Mummy too?β
βNo!β Her motherβs voice broke on her laugh. βWhy would you need a new Mummy? I am here arenβt I?β She paused. βBut I am Ronβs new Mummy. Hello dear,β she held out her arms.
βI am 9 years old and I donβt need a new Mummy.β Ron stomped out of the room.
βHello, I am Jake.β The tall stranger bent down.
Rhea stared at him unblinkingly. βI am 6 years old and I also donβt want a new Daddy.β
βFair enough. Maybe you would like a new friend?β
βI donβt make friends easily.β She warned.
βGreat! I do. So letβs play a game shall we?β
βGame?β
βA game to see who wins β you at not making friends or me at making friends.β Jake held up his hand.
Intrigued and almost reflexively, Rhea gave him a high five. βGame on!β She grinned at him confident of winning.
βAha!β Jake pointed a finger at her, his eyes twinkling. βBe careful, you are smiling; you could lose the game.β
Rhea hurriedly straightened her expression but it slipped. She pressed her lips and turned away. βI am going to my room Mummy.β She cast Jake a sidelong glance.
Jake grinned. βI am going to win just you wait.β
Rhea stalked off with her nose in the air. She spoilt it by turning back to check if Jake was looking at her. He winked. She giggled and ran off.
Rhea was in a fix – she liked Jake but she didnβt want a new Daddy. Neither did she want a new brother.
But where was he?
Rhea peeked into the guest room. Ah, there he was, glued to his PSP.
She pushed the door open. He ignored her. Encouraged, she entered. βYou are staying in this room?β
βDonβt ask stupid questions.β
βThat means you are just a guest.β Rheaβs voice dripped with satisfaction.
Ron sent her a withering glance.
Unfazed Rhea carried on. βWhereβs your Mummy? Is she also a pilot?β
Ron glared. βMy Mummy is dead do you understand? Like your father is dead.β
βMy father is not dead. His airplane got lost and he canβt find his way back. When I grow up I am going to be a pilot. I will find him and bring him back.β
βDonβt be a fool. Your father is dead. He can never come back.β
βWhen I become a pilot, I will hunt for your Mummy too.β
βGet out of my room leave me alone.β He slammed the door on her face.
Rhea knocked on the door until he opened the door. βWhat?β he snarled.
βMy Daddy isnβt dead. He is playing hide and seek with me. He is doing this to make me to eat. I try very hard but I still canβt eat. No matter how hard I try, it all comes out. Thatβs why Daddy is still hiding from me. But he canβt hide forever can he? Did your Mummy play hide and seek with you?β
Ronβs throat worked. βNo. She used to tell me stories. After I finished my homework.β
βDid you do your homework?β
βNo.β
βOh but then that will only make her angrier. Maybe if you did your homeworkβ¦β
βStop talking nonsense will you?β
βMummy also tells stories. Shall I ask her to tell youβ¦?β
βNo! I donβt want your Mummy to tell me a story. Go away and leave me alone.β
βI also know many stories. Shall I tell you a story?β
βOf Cinderella and Sleeping Beauty? No thanks.β He turned his back to her. But then he turned around again and burst out. βJust becoming a pilot wonβt help. When people die they become stars. And pilots canβt reach the stars. But what would you know?β He scoffed.
She stood there beaten, but only for a moment. βAstronauts can reach the stars. I will become a pilot and you become an astronaut. Together we will find them.β She clapped her hands. βThis is better than hide and seek.β
βGet out.β Ron pushed her out and closed the door.
She looked up to find Jake staring at her.
βGive him time.β Jake said. βLike you he also takes time to make friends.β He grinned. βNot like me.β
Rhea turned away but he called out. βI was just going to eat mangoes and then plant the seeds.β
Rhea stopped.
βWould you like to help me?β
Rhea nodded.
βGreat! Let me call Ron as well.β
Gia peeped in to see all three of them, elbow deep in mango, peels on one side, and seeds on the other.
βReady to plant some seeds?β
βYay, letβs go!β Rhea scrambled up from her chair and ran out into the garden. The others followed sedately.
It was hot, sunny, and messy but a lot of fun. There were five seeds and each planted one.
βLetβs plant the last one together,β suggested Jake. So, with great enthusiasm (Rhea) and a show of reluctance (Ron), the last seed was planted rather ceremoniously.
βWell well! Just look at all of us!β Jake laughed. Rhea looked down at herself. There was no denying it she was the muddiest of the lot. βOh! It will take ages to clean up. And Mummy will scold me for dirtying the bathroom.β She pouted.
βHmm.β Jake tapped his cheek thoughtfully. βLet me see. How about this?β He picked up the hose and swung it towards her bare mud-caked legs. Rhea squealed and jumped. He leaned towards her. βCome on now itβs Ronβs turn.β
Rheaβs eyes widened. She grabbed the hosepipe and together they sprayed Ron top to toe. He gave a yell and jumped into fray and soon it was a free for all session, even Gia wasnβt spared. Shrieks, screams and laughter cascaded over them in healing waves.
Rhea was sporting enough to accept defeat and accept Jake as her friend if not her Daddy. Ron remained aloof and insisted on maintaining his distance. But that didnβt stop Rhea from pestering him. She would wait impatiently for him to return from school and then sit with him while he had his lunch. She would weave exotic and far-fetched plans to bring back her Daddy and his Mummy quite oblivious of his silence and rejection.
Until one day she didnβt come to sit with him.
Restless, Ron sought her out. He found her curled up in her chair, clutching her Daddyβs picture.
βWhat happened?β His voice was gruff.
βYou were right. My Daddy and your Mummy are dead. They have gone away to a place where no pilot can go.β Tears rolled down her cheeks.
βHow do you know?β
βMy teacher asked us what we wanted to be when we grew up. I told her I wanted to be a pilot so that I could bring back my Daddy. Sheβ¦she laughed at me.β She sobbed. βTheβ¦the whole cβ¦class laughed at me. Nobody can bring back my Daddy or your Mummy.β Rhea was quite inconsolable.
Ron stood there feeling the familiar helpless rage creep up on him. βOf course you canβt. Didnβt I tell you that long ago? But donβt worry when I grow up I will become an astronaut. I will bring back my Mummy and your Daddy.β
Rheaβs tears dried miraculously. βReally? Promise?β
Ron looked at her with foreboding. βOnly if you donβt nag me. And you canβt tell anyone about this. It has to be our secret.β
Rhea nodded. βCross my heart and hope to die. And I promise I wont even come and sit with you when you have lunch.β
Ron coughed. βYou can sit if you like. I donβt mind.β
Rhea threw her arms around Ron. He let her hug him before pushing her away with a ferocious frown. She dimpled at him. She had another friend! He would bring her Daddy back. She skipped away to her Mummy.
βWhy are you packing Mummy? Are we going somewhere?β
βYes we are soon going away from here Rhea.β
βWhere? To Daddy?β
βNo, to a new house.β
βBut why Mummy? What about our mango tree? The one we all planted?β
Gia shrugged. βWe are now shifting to Bangalore where my new job is.β
βAll of us?β
βNo just us. You didnβt want a new Daddy or a new brotherβ¦β
βThat was before Mummy. Santa was right. Iβ¦I like my new Daddy. Ron too.β
βItβs too late now. They are also leaving.β
And today Ron was gone. Jake too. They would never return, just like her Daddy. Ron would grow up and forget his promise. He would find his Mummy but not her Daddy. She clutched her pillow to crush out the pain in her chest. Ron was just a little boy but how could Jake do this to her? Hadnβt he said they were friends forever?
A paper fluttered. She picked it up. A smiley stared up at her holding a placard –Friends forever. And underneath it was a phone number.
Rheaβs heart gave a leap. Jake hadnβt really gone away. She could phone him anytime!
Butβ¦but why hadnβt Daddy left his phone number? Daddy was mean. So was Mummy.
βMummy, you are mean too. You let Daddy go. And now you let my new Daddy and new brother go too. This time for Christmas I am going to ask Santa for a new Mummy.β
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Yup, this one didn’t make the list eitherΒ – how about you telling me what you think – the good, the bad and the ugly…
But on a positive note – my blogger friend Ramya won the first prize for this prompt π My heartiest congratulations to her! If you like, you can hop over to her blog for some awesome stories.
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