
The Gullible Groom
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“It is customary to bring prospective grooms here to pay obeisance.” She said.
He folded his hands and bowed.
“The tree has supernatural powers.” Her voice dropped to a whisper. “She turns evil grooms turn into stones.”
“Really?” He snorted.
“That stone on the far right? That’s my last suitor.”
“Nonsense.”
“Ask Granny about that stone in the middle. He had his eyes on her property.”
“You’re pulling my leg.”
“When Radha’s husband demanded dowry, she brought him here.” She pointed.
He shivered.
“Why are you worried?” she snuggled up to him.
He vanished.
Another fool after her millions she snickered.
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I have two submissions this to week’s Friday Fictioneer’s – sorry I couldn’t resist 🙂 The other one is here but they aren’t interlinked.
Written for Friday Fictioneers – a story in 100 words or less. Thanks to Rochelle for hosting the challenge and Sandra Crook for the beautiful photo. To read the other stories inspired by this prompt click here.
Thanks for reading 🙂
A great fairy-tale atmosphere to this, Dahlia
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Thanks Neil 🙂
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That’s one way to weed out suitors with ulterior motives 🙂
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😀
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She’s a clever gal for sure. And this is a clever story, Dahlia. Good one.
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Thanks Varad
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Dear Dahlia,
A wealthy woman can’t be too careful. 😉 Clever bride-to-perhaps-be. Clever writer.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thank you Rochelle 😀
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A bit like an entrance examination. Very good.
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Thank you Sandra
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That’s one bride you can’t mess with. Very nicely done.
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😀 Thanks!
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Clever girl. We should all have a mysterious looking tree to protect us from unscrupulous suiters….Freinds.
Good morning Dahlia.
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Hi Ferdi! Yep wouldnt it be wonderful if we could have such trees 😉
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Nice story.
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Thank you 🙂
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You’re welcome.
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You made me smile. No dearth of such grooms here.
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😉 Thanks for reading and commenting YS 🙂
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Beautiful stories, amazing sense of thrill, the picture though eerie reflects a lot, loved your take on the photo
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Thanks so much 🙂
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Naise 👌
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Thanks for visiting 🙂
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Those stones will gather won’t they, but I find she will discover her perfect bride, but fear what damage will have been done to her in the process of being stoned. 🙃 Great story, again, Dahlia (I am reading backwards from the last story today, hopefully I will meet myself reading forwards from the first story the other day).
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Thank you for reading and commenting Kelvin 🙂
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Clever and funny too…that tree looks like a Khalnayak 😃
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Hahaha – Khalnayak 😀
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Bah❤️ very fun – and now off to the next
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Love this story D
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Thanks so much BB 🙂
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