The Sneaky Ways of Fate
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The train chugged out of the station. He tried to the quell butterflies in his stomach, an alien city, an unfamiliar language. Jobless in Kolkata, fate had offered him a job in Delhi he had grabbed it.
In another part of the country, hectic preparations were on to send her to college.
Tonight, they would take the train to Agra.
Fate blinked. Oops! Her destiny was in Delhi.
โA telegram,โ father said, โconfirming admission in a Delhi college.โ
Fate sighed. Her job was done.
Same city.
Same campus.
Time would lead them to Room 4027.
Biology and chemistry would do the rest.
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Footnote: The numbers triggered this piece.
Written for the Friday Fictioneers – a story in 100 words or less. Thanks to Rochelle for hosting the challenge and to Kent Bonham for the photo prompt. To read the other stories inspired by the prompt click here.
Thank you for visiting – have a super week ๐
It has to start somewhere. Serendipity.
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I guess! Thank you for visiting ๐
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based on a real story? ๐
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Yep the story of my life๐
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Guessed so ๐๐
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What is 40? 27 is birth date, of two people ๐ 40 kya hai? ๐ค
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๐๐ 40 kuch nahi hai! Just detailed out to Neil๐
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A story to raise a smile. Nicely written, Dahlia!
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Aww thanks so much Penny๐๐น
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Nice use of the numbers. Is there a secret meaning?
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Intereating actually all except one number is relevant. came to Delhi on 8th September 1982. My (yet to be) husband came 5 days before and I was almost 18 years old๐
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Got to love fate. Nice story, Dahlia
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Thanks Sascha๐
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There definitely seems to be the hand of fate behind some things!
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They will forever be saying, ‘if you hadn’t taken that job’, or ‘If I hadn’t passed that entrance exam’.
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Yes! Thank you for reading ๐
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An almost script-like story in its economy and crispness. Thank you for posting and showing yet another way of writing flash fiction.
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Thank you for reading and the lovely comment.
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Serendipitous, for sure! Thank you for sharing part of your own story! What a lovely series of events!
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Love the tone of this one. Makes one review his belief in the cosmic destiny.
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Thank you YS ๐
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Oh yes! I totally believe in fate. We may take credit for so many things but we really are only led there by ? Fate. Loved this cute love story…..
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Thanks so much ๐
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Indeed a good , honest yet compelling in its own way as it is reflecting an innocence in it….Dhalia, its all predestined….very well written and a heartwarming story, loved it !
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Thank you ๐
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Nice little story of fate – glad you explained it all – fate that the number plate should be your prompt this week!
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Haha – Touche! ๐
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Dear Dahlia,
I love the way you’ve personified Fate. You’ve outdone yourself, my dear. Lovely piece. I enjoyed it very much.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thank you Rochelle, coming from you, it means a lot.
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I was going to tell you how beautiful and sweet this one is and then read the comments and got to know that how special this piece really is. It was so endearing โค It reminded me of one illustration that I love so much.
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Thank you! Dare I ask which illustration?
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The above one. I meant illustration as well as the text in it. Its so cute
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Phew! Fate intervened just in time๐
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Hey! Loved this post – would you check out my latest short story which is also about fate and how the universe works in mysterious ways https://tanyatale.wordpress.com/2017/08/18/short-story-one-word/
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Thanks Tanya. Will do๐
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Shalom,
Rochelle
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