Haiku is just three lines and yet i find it the most difficult form to attempt. And probably that’s why i have so few haiku published. Sharing one today, which is actually not a haiku (i did tell you i am still struggling with it) but a senryu, which in contrast to haiku deals with human elements rather than nature.
Wishing you all a very happy Bengali New Year! And my warm, albeit belated, greetings to all for Baisakhi, Vishu, Ugadi, Puthandu, Maha Vishubha Sankranti, Bohag Bihu and (my apologies for the) many more that I am sure to have missed. This New Year, may all our lives be filled with peace and joy.
Posting one of my published tanka for your kind perusal.
Hello everyone. Hope everyone is having a good day. Today is special for me as it is my Father’s birthday. I am celebrating by posting my first published haibun and the new story.
Thank you for visiting and leaving me a note. Have a great day.
Ah and the promised story…
From today I begin to post the story Some Sugar & Spice. It is the story of various women and one man stuck in the middle of it all, though not in the way you are imagining! ๐
And don’t worry, this is a limited series and is likely to be about 38 chapters long. If you are ready for another ride, do hop on! See you there ๐
Hello and welcome to my second post of the day. A rarity I assure you but the thing is I thought I had posted my entry for Collen’s #TankaTuesday challenge but apparently I had just thought about it. But thankfully, the unexpected rains washed away the pollution daze and I am double posting before it is too late. The rules are to to write in any of the 24 syllabic forms of Japanese poetry using a kigo or season word as an inspiration. While there are 24 seasons in Japan, we are allowed to use season words as per our region.
Hereโs my tanka for the challenge:
jobless
browsing the internet for
Diwali deals
buying clothes for
the summer
As you may have guessed, the Indian or dare I say the global festival of lights, Diwali is the kigo word here. Wishing everyone a very Happy and Prosperous Diwali. May all the darkness be banished, evil vanquished and peace reign supreme.
It’s time for Colleens #TankaTuesday the weekly challenge (October 22 โ November 6). The rules are to to write in any of the 24 syllabic forms of Japanese poetry using a kigo or season word as an inspiration. While there are 24 seasons in Japan, we are allowed to use season words as per our region.
Here’s my tanka for the challenge:
hazy morning
jogging before
Diwali
deciding to wear
a sari
Although Diwali could be the kigo word but since this year it is on 12th of November I thought perhaps it may be too early to use it. Yet it may be noted, everything is geared around Diwali now, particularly shopping. But anyway I have used ‘hazy morning’ as the kigo word as this time of the year is notorious for pollution haze, particularly in Delhi region due to a variety of factors which apparently are beyond correction. I am presuming that most, if not all, will be familiar with Diwali the festival of lights when Lord Rama returned home after spending 14 years in the wilderness and defeating the evil King Ravan. A sari is the traditional unstitched garment that is 6 yards (5.5 meters) long. I am hoping the advantages of opting for such an apparel would be self-evident ๐
Posting this for Bushboy’s photo challenge. Post the last photo on your SD card or last photo on your phone for the 30th October or whenever your last photo was taken. No explanations are needed just the photo will do. Despite good intentions I couldnt resist jabbering and attempted a haiku as well. Something to kickstart November. This is also for Cee’s FOTD challenge.
bee sips
from the orange hibiscus
does it sting?
If you are here, do say a word or two – just a hello will do ๐
PS: For those who may have visited my earlier post – CMMC: Photos with a P please note that this is a different hibiscus ๐ She is blooming gorgeous blooms. Touch wood!!!!
Hello hope this week has been treating you well. It’s time for Eugi’s Moonwashed Weekly Prompt challenge. The prompt is Either Or. It can be any variation of the prompt or the image (below).
Once Upon a Time
A world of trees Green, brown and orange Reaching up to wave at blue Skies smudged with white Tall grasses twinkle With drops of dew Shielding centipedes, mites, Leeches, frogs to name a few
Already dark and time for The football match Up on the roof The rats and squirrels Having a field day While in the kitchen Mom plays hockey with a rat or is it a shrew?
Dad practiced duelling snakes while Mom had her dessert under the Watchful eye of a King cobra Bees and wasps swirled bestowing the gift of a plump arm or a misshapen face just like rashes from insects and cacti
Exams denounced Packed off to picnics Streams swirled around our legs All through the night Those dratted parrots pecked at mangoes and summer vacations with afternoon shifts to shoo parrots
Swinging high and higher Climbing guava trees taking home Red bites that turned yellow and black Bleeding gashes wrapped in Crushed marigold leaves For a stye in the eye Seven strokes of mango leaf stem Did the trick
The nearest town of one shop A couple of miles away Never did we ever cross a street Nor venture to shop or crave to eat No TV, no phone no internet All I missed were books Other than those I had Read a gazillion times
Would I go back? Why when the path is ahead Cocooned in the warm clasp of Unfearful memories Bouncing through Lifeโs myriad adventures Much like the fools that rush in But that is another storyโฆ
The photo reminded me of my childhood home (except it wasnt that orange!) and couldn’t help penning a few lines – not quite sure if you can call it a poem. But if you managed to come this far thank you for sticking it out till the end of what is quite a faithful account of my idyllic childhood.
PS: I was unable to format the poem into paragraphs and hence I took the help of colors. Apologies if it is looking weird.
PPS: It was looking even more weird with the alternating colors so used this format (Pullquote). At least the paragraphs are clearly demarcated. Do let me know if you have any suggestions for formats to use. Thank you.