
A Shoddy Job
97 Words
“For sale: baby shoes, never worn”
She sighed. Another blank. Why did she even try?
She frowned and stared at the prompt.
A sturdy pair of shoes.
Just like the ones she needed to fulfill her New Year resolution.
Perhaps she could buy one before the year ended. At least it would be a step in the right direction. The shoes looked comfortable, not something that would give shoe bite. But probably beyond her shoestring budget, she sighed.
Perhaps she would dig out an old pair, go for a walk, and find some inspiration on the way.
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Written for the Friday Fictioneers – a story in 100 words or less. Thanks to Rochelle for hosting the challenge and Adam Ickes for the photo prompt. To read the other stories inspired by this prompt (and showcase your story) click here.
Something is better than nothing right? Or not? Go on say it!
Thanks for reading and (hopefully) commenting.
And a second submission here after the ‘inspirational’ walk 😀
I hope her new year’s resolution brings her some peace and recovery.
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Hope so too! Thanks Jilly 🙂
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She wants to buy a pair of shoes for her(?) child as a Christmas present?.
Sorry, Dahlia, my mind is still snoozing and it is already past 8:30 AM. It is a lovely mild sunny morning. The birds are looking for food and as usual, the squirrel is burying food for winter and will start digging up the garden looking for hidden trove.
Lovely to see your post today. Thank you. have a good Day.
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Happy to see you here, was missing your descriptions 🙂
I was trying to write a lament on writer’s block and the train of thoughts evoked by the photo prompt.
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I also thought of the baby shoes never worn when I saw the prompt. I feel your pain
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Thanks Neil, this time the drought is rather endless with scattered mirages on the way
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Sometimes all it needs is a good long walk in the fresh air. Hope she finds some inspiration 🙂
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Ah well winsome lose some but the think is to try and show up. Thanks Iain 🙂
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Hopefully she fid the inspiration
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Thanks!
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Fresh air is just the thing for inspiration.
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Indeed it is! Thanks for visiting
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Hemmingway never minces words. But I understand her discouragement: how can we ever hope to compete?
So familiar with the longing for that one thing that is financially out of reach.
And a walk as inspiration–I think Nietzche was quite fond of those. Papa might prefer fishing. 😊love the stream of consciousness in this writer’s oh so familiar procrastination.
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Thank you for reading and a lovely comment 🙂
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A nice long walk always gets my mind buzzing, hope it worked for her. 🙂
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Yep, only now her feet are abuzz with shoebite 🙂 Thanks for reading Brenda!
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We all have those moments. And they usually turn into great “writer’s block” posts! As this one has.
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Ah thank you Dale for a generous comment 🙂
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She should go for a walk wearing an old pair. Ultimately, walking is more important than new pair of shoes.
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Oh darn it, there goes another of her excuses… 😉 😀 Thanks so much Abhijit for reading 🙂
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I can relate. Thank you.
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I loved the theme extended word play – from shoddy, through shoestring budget, to the mind-clearing walk. 🙂
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Thank you so very much for seeing what I tried to do. I have to confess that I was rather pleased with it but my initial euphoria (more like a gloating glee) was on a sharp down spiral but your comment revived me 😀
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Dear Dahlia,
Brilliant word play. I see Archon beat me to my comment. Well done writers block story. I enjoyed this tongue in cheek piece.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Rochelle you made my year! Thank you 🙂
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You used some excellent literary devices here, stringing them all through the story. Well done.
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Thank you Linda! 🙂
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Baby needs shoes… Good stream…
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If you wrote that clever piece before your inspirational stroll I’d love to read what you came up with you returned!
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Thanks Keith! Actually I did manage to pen another story, would love to know your thoughts 🙂
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Hope it works out for her.
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A long walk always helps. I also read the one you wrote on the ‘dadu’ and granddaughter relationship. I found that story very sweet.
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Thank you Piyali for reading both and leaving me a lovely comment 🙂
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You’re welcome, Dahlia. Merry Christmas to you and your family.
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Happy New Year to you and yours Piyali 🙂
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Happy 2019 to you too, Dhalia!
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This isn’t a shoddy job at all! I can really relate to the thought process in this piece.
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Thank you very much Magarisa 🙂
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You’re welcome, Dahlia!
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Frankly preferred your shoddy job to your inspired walk . I enjoyed your frank rambling because that’s pretty much my reaction when I see a prompt that doesn’t reach out to me instantly
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Thank you Sunita! I have to confess I also preferred this one 😀 Sorry to have been MIA, real life is too taxing and distracting, though (touch wood) mostly in a good way.
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An Ernest start 😉
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😀
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