Written for Rochelle’s Friday Fictioneers – a story in 100 words or less based on the photo prompt provided this week by Vijaya – Thanks Rochelle, thanks Vijaya π For remarkable stories on this prompt click here.

2084
Words 99
Diwali celebrations were on. Only Omβs house was dark.
Vidya paced the terrace. She didnβt have time to mourn his passing. She had other things on her mind β would the years of experimentation pay off? Had they achieved that elusive fusion of ultramodern technology and ancient mind control?
Vidya pressed the amplification button implanted in her wrist and concentrated.
Nothing.
Foreboding assailed her. What if they had again miscalculated? Would Om go Dev’s way?
Focus dammit focus!
Her wrist throbbed.
The button vibrated emitting waves in Omβs distinctive handwriting β Netherworld cooler than Delhi. No pollution either. Dev says Hi.
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That sure is an unique take …. would like to read more on fusion of ultramodern technology and ancient mind control. Nicely done.
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Thank you!
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That’s great fun
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Glad you enjoyed
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Dear Dahlia,
I thoroughly enjoyed your futuristic story. The last line made me laugh out loud.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thanks for your generous comment Rochelle.
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So will she join them both down there? Great story.
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Likely to work on improving the app π thanks for reading
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Wow, cool! Interesting coming together of mind and tech and death! There are so many threads on your blog- your creativity is booming:)
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Wow! Thanks a lot π
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Hmm.. perhaps you should try writing science fiction now?
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Creative, imaginative, unique and funny. Well-done! Love your take on the picture, and pleased that you (along with yarnspinnerr) recognized it as Diwali).
(I’ve had computer issues. Sorry to get to this so late!)
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Thank so much! And a great picture and prompt π
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Wah, that’s our future. What an imagination for this “light and dark” pic!! With this scenario, people would start preferring the Netherworld π
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π π
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Getting super cool with supernaturals!…may be in 2084, you can brag “see, I had predicted so in 2016!” and we(some of us, and definitely hoping me included!) can bob our heads agreeing to it…. π
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In 2084 I will ‘send’ a message to u from the Other land π
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I will be in Netherland. ..so do ping me like how Vidya would do then π π
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It’s a deal π
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