Hello! Hope you are having a super day. Here’s my attempt to participate in the weekly flash fiction party hosted by Rochelle where everyone is welcome to join. Click here to read the other stories inspired by the photo prompt below.
Spinning a Yarn
Words 100
βI want my order on the 15th,β the customer said.
βBut Madam,β Rekha pleaded, β30th was the agreed date. Chikankari* is handmade, itβs time-consuming and back-breaking β¦.β
βI can pay extra.β
βTheyβre award winning artisans, one canβt just orderβ¦β
βHow about 30% extra?β
βIβll request them.β
βSo darn hot!β Rekha moaned at her artisanβs makeshift shop, a mat, under the banyan tree.
The wizened woman looked up from her embroidery.
βWhen will my order be ready?β
βAnother 10 days.β
β5 days.β
βSorry Madamji. My son isnβt well and myβ¦β
βNot my business. For each dayβs delay, I will deduct 10%.
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A/N * Chikankari is the technique of creation of a chikan work, which is a delicate hand embroidery on a variety of textile fabrics. Traditional chikankari is white floral embroidery on soft pastel shades of light muslin and cotton. You may visit this link for more information
Thanks for visiting. Would love to know your thoughts. Have a great day π
That is not a nice person. I would tell her to take her business elsewhere
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Thanks BB for your comment! π
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That Customer is so mean. It’s better to tell her to take her business elsewhere so that she knows to value and not take advantage of such a nice person.
Thanks
Chinnulu
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I thought Rekha was worse, at least the customer offered extra money. Or did I mis-write it?
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So it was Rekha who was dealing with the artisan, thought it was the customer who was dealing with the artisan. Got it all wrong. Sorry for reading and misunderstanding all wrong and thanks for clearing it.
Chinnulu
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Ah thanks Chinnulu for getting back, I was worried I had messed up.
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Rekha has a hard heart. She knows the conditions the artisan is forced to work in, and uses her poverty and troubles to force compliance. I suspect that many specialty items are produced under such circumstances. A moving story, and well told.
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Thanks a lot Margaret π
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Wow, that’s rough. Some people are mean.
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π Thanks π
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The reality of our world. The big business not passing on a bit of the huge profit they make to the poor workers. Thank you Dahlia.
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Thanks Ferdiπ
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I wonder if the customer really doesn’t know, or just prefers not to acknowledge it
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That’s an insightful comment Neil. Thanks
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Extortion and control cascades from the rich, until the worm turns.
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Thanks π
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A sordid side of business.
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True. Thanks Linda π
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Well-told Dahlia and brutal people willing to exploit the most impoverished and yet I am guilty myself of wanting a bargain and to get something cheap or at least affordable which is worth far more.
Thank you btw for making me aware of Chikankari embroidery. It certainly looks familiar and I read a few interesting articles about it. Very beautiful with an interesting back story and good to hear there are moves to preserve it.
Best wishes,
Rowena
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Thanks, Rowena, for sharing your thoughts. I guess we all are guilty, hopefully to a lesser extent than Rekha. ππ€
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Tough cookie. Well done.
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Thank you π
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That’s a sad reality. Rekha gets “kicked”, so she passes the “kick” down the line.
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Not just a kick but a ‘milk’ as well. Thank you π
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A sad but often true story of the way things are done. Nicely told, though, Dahlia!
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Thanks Brenda
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the customer is supposed to be always right. but not on this one.
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Yep! Thanks
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I have seen workers doing chikankari in Lucknow. It’s labour intensive and time consuming job
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Yes indeed. Thanks for visiting π
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Rekha’s not a great boss, is she? If she’s not kind to her artisans, she won’t have any very soon.
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Unfortunately Rekha is the kinds to succeed
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Some people are never satisfied.
A real shrew!
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So true. Thanks π
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Dahlia, excellent telling of a story illustrating the “trickle down effect” of the worst kind. The artistry that goes into the detail of the Chikankari work is amazing.
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Thank you for your lovely comment.
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You’re welcome.
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A displeasing chain of events. I leave wiser thanks to your interesting footnote!
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Thanks!
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If she offered an extra 30% to have it sooner it seems reasonable to rescind that offer in increments such as she states. however, if she is deducting percentages of the original price, when she was clearly informed that this kind of work requires time, then yes, find another customer who is more reasonable and appreciative.
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Thanks Dawn for visiting and sharing your thoughts π
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To me, a story that evokes comments such as this, is a job well done. So..well done.
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Thanks Dawn for your lovely comments π
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I see someone isn’t to be messed with…
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Thanks! π
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Great story, Dahlia and I’ve learned something new–Chikankari embroidery. You can tell by its delicate intricacy that it can be time consuming. Thanks for sharing the link π Rekha made it appear that there were more than one artisan working for her but it sounds like it’s just the one who’s working under a banyan tree in the heat.
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I am so glad you could see thatπ
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Dear Dahlia,
And so goes the chain of command in business. That embroidery looks too intricate to rush. Good story of how brutal humans can be to one another.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thanks so Rochelle for your support π
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A good one, Dahlia.
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This is the cycle I despise. Business is business and money is power; humanity be damned, life unappreciated. You struck a chord where, weβll done
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Thank youπ
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