
Enslaved
Words 102
“There!” Mohini huffed from the gentle climb on to the dam, “This is where I grew up, beside the mighty Ganga. Beautiful isn’t she?”
Sia blew on the bubble till it popped. “Sure.” She ruminated, busy taking selfies. “The mountains in the distance look better. She’s too dull and bloated, like an over-fed slithering python for my liking.”
“She wasn’t always like this. She was free, fresh and sparkling, singing her song while skipping and dancing her way over boulders and stones.“
“What happened?”
“She was dammed up for the greater good.”
“How much longer Mohini?” Her husband called. “I am hungry.”
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Written for the Friday Fictioneers – a story in 100 words or less. Thanks to Rochelle for hosting the challenge and Dale for the photo prompt. If you want to read the other stories inspired by this prompt (or add your link) click here.
One always wonders if dams truly do the greater good…
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True, every dam has it’s own breaking point 😉
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I think the last line hinted at a deeper theme!
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Yes! Thank you
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Hunger always trumps other concerns
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True and is terribly weakening too 😉
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Haha! Another clever short fiction story from you. How the dam turned out sounded like how a relationship might have run its course over the years 😀 How about a round of burger and fries for you 🍔🍟
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Hi Mabel! Been ages since I had burger and fries – esp virtual ones. 😀 Thank you very much 🙂
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Well then, you can have another round of burger and fries since it’s so long 😀
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You are too kind😁
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Am waiting….
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Okay, okay! Another round of burger and fries for you 🍔🍟
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😏😑🙄 just one round?😯
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Have you been naughty or nice? 😀 Another round for the weekend 🍔🍟
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🤔 Nice n naughty🤓😉
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Good Afternoon Dahlia. It is all over my head. Can’t think of anything clever. I would not mind joining you and Mabel for a vegeburger and chips.
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Would love it!
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Dear Dahlia,
There’s so much story written between the lines. Interesting that the husband cares about one thing. Well written.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thanks Rochelle 🙂
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What a lovely analogy for Mohini’s life.
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Ahh thank you!
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Wow, wat a metaphor and pun intended, amazing piece loved it…
part 2 can be written too , lovely!
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Thanks!
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The eternal “ pet Pooja! “ really these men and their hunger pangs …. missed you all these weeks . Where were you Dahlia?
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Aww Sunita thank you for missing me! 🙂 Real life is too jam-packed and jet setting for flights of fancy. It still is but am trying to slowly get back into the groove – fingers crossed! Will be over to see what I missed 🙂
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You nailed it again Dahlia.
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Yay! Thanks Rupali!
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Is it just me who found it more than just the dam, especially from the last line? I see a ‘dammed up’ woman. Sorry if I am wrong.
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Yes indeed I was hoping that would come across! Thank you for reading and commenting 🙂
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Hello Dahlia, when I read this the first time I did not know what to say. Recently I was watching a nature programme. It was about a river in the countryside would flood the plains whenever there was a lot of rains. The people got the idea of bringing back the river otters. When the river is shallow the otters build dames by using tree trunks and branches to catch fish but when the river rises after a heavy downpour they remove the branches and let the river flow and but build the dam where there was a danger of overflowing. By doing this they diverted the water So by building and removing the dam the otters managed the river.
When the humans build concrete structures to dam the river it works for some time but every so often the flood water escapes and causes a lot of od damage.
As for Mohini one day her patience will break and her husband (if lucky) will find the food dumped on his head.
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That’s so interesting! Never knew that otters are so clever and smart. I find otters terribly cute 🙂
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😀 I was just imagining Mohini’s hubby’s expression with food dripping down his head 😀
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