
Precious Games
Word 175
“Rohit bought a diamond pendant for his fiancé.” Ruchi fiddled with her locket.
“Jealous?” Shlok mocked.
“Me! Jealous of…”
“You married the wrong guy. You knew I could never afford…”
“Where there is a will there is a way. If Rohit can afford…”
“Rohit’s father is a rich man. Mine isn’t.”
“Don’t you dare belittle Rohit’s thoughtful gesture.”
“So protective! I thought you were put out with Rohit?”
“Nonsense! I was just commenting…”
“To what purpose?”
“Does everything have to have a purpose? I was just trying to have a conversation…”
“Yeah right. I know a hint when I hear one.”
“Then why turn a deaf ear to it?”
“I dislike having my hand forced. Why not ask Rohit to buy….”
“I prefer that his father should buy me. Out of his own free will.”
“It could be a long wait.”
“If need be, I will wait until eternity.”
“Nagging, until eternity.” Shlok stroked his chin. “I am game. Are you?”
“But of course. The fun is in the game, not a piece of glass.”
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Written for the Flash Fiction for Aspiring Writers hosted by Priceless Joy with the photo prompt provided by Jade. Thank you Jade and thank you Joy. For other stories click here.
I am running terribly late, do let me know if this made any sense or it needs more work – thank you!
needs some work. why ask rohi
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Jealous of what her son bought for his Fiance, hmmmm, Couple games are the best… Looks like they have a lot of fun.
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Phew! So glad you got it! 🙂
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“I prefer that his father should buy me, out of his own free will”…. “ufff, what is this”, and I went back to the beginning, read it again, back until this line and ‘ting’, ghanti baji 🙂 Hahaahaa, ‘game of nagging’ or any other, mind games are real fun. Would that moment of “own free will” ever come, if this game of nagging continues until eternity??? Equating a diamond to a glass … what a sacrilege 😉
Loved their conversations…. each one was playing with their minds. Excellent!!
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😀 Yeah I know – but a girl’s gotta do what it takes to win the game right? 😉 Thanks so much Svkuki 🙂
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Hahahaha! Cute story! Seems this couple have a lot of fun with each other! If I haven’t welcomed you to the challenge I would like to welcome you! Welcome to the FFfAW challenge! We are happy you have joined us.
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Thank you Joy – happy to be on board. Glad you liked 🙂
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I like your take on this one. 🙂
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Thanks 🙂
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You take a challenge and throw another on us…A game to decipher the lines ….A game to uncover the complete picture…I am game too…really enjoying the read you provide us with…it’s like “stand alert…and then, ready steady po” 😉
Shlok himself has planned the game…so be it!
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Hehe – knew you would appreciate the ‘game’ after all you are a master (or rather mistress) of sending us off on wild goose chases with your WWness 😉 😀
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You are smart and you are making us smarter…we know now what you are upto…shaitaani dimaag.
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