Hello I am back after a week of prayers, celebrations, socializing and gorging 😀 And it’s already time for Colleen’s #TankaTuesday challenge where the rules are to to write in any of the 24 syllabic forms of Japanese poetry using a kigo or season word as an inspiration. While there are 24 seasons in Japan, we are allowed to use season words as per our region.
She leaves
a quietude behind
Vijayadashami
praying for the guns
to fall silent
I have used ‘Vijayadashami’ (literally victory tenth day) as the kigo word here. Vijayadashami (which was on 24th October this year) is celebrated after Navratri and is the 10th day that marks the end of Durga Puja and the celebration of Her victory over Mahishasura (the buffalo demon) and the triumph of good over evil. After the celebrations, there is a hush and lull in the neighborhood.
Vijayadashami is also celebrated as Dussehra, the day when Lord Rama defeated the evil king Raavan, whose effigies are burnt to symbolize the burning of the evils within us as well as the triumph of good over evil.
Thank you for reading, would love to know your comments and suggestion. Have a great weekend.
lovely tanka and explanation ; I think people elsewhere in the world are waiting for the guns to fall silent —
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Thank you John
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I looked up Gulmohar; very, very beautiful; they are called flame trees in Australia and there is a very famous Cold Chisel track called ‘Flame Trees’ ; they are an aussie band —
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Ah didn’t know about the band. Will try to post pictures of the gulmohar near my house but that will take some time!
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look forward to it —
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😁🤞
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Very beautiful, and I hope guns fall silent
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Thank you.
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Of the recent happenings in the world,who is the enemy? Depends who you believe.In India we celebrate Dassera by burning the effigy of Ravana but some places he is revered.
Today is the Sharad Purnima(full moon) and we (Gijaratis) eat flaked rise sweetened with sugar and milk and play Dandia Raas at night.
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Today Bengalis celebrate Lakshmi Puja😊🙏
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Beautiful Tanka.
With everything happening around the world Guns will never fall silent but will hope they will soon.
Thanks
Chinnulu
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Amen🙏
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Oh this is so perfect, Dahlia. We’re all praying for the guns to stop… everywhere. 🙏🏻
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Thank you Colleen 🙏
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You’re so welcome.
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Thank you for teaching us something new about Vijayadashami. I did some addtional looking-up on my own. I like how you incorporated this holiday!
May we all be renewed with strength for peace for everyone.
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Amen. Thank you for visiting and commenting 🙂
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No body wins when guns are going. Everyone has losses.
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And yet they go on…beats me 😦 Thanks Marsha for visiting
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You’re welcome. Sadly, there aren’t easy answers. Only love conquers hate. No one that I know of can legislate that.
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I second Colleen–we are all praying for peace. Hopefully someone is listening. (K)
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Hopefully 🙏🤞
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Beautifully put 💜
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Thank you!
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Good tanka on the important festival of India 👏👏
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Thank you KKji🙏😊
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That is beautiful. Thank you for the very interesting information on the holiday.
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Thank you for your lovely comment 😊
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Lovely Tanka, Dahlia. You explained the festival beautifully. We are all waiting for the guns to fall silent, but as long as they mean money to some, they never will.
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You are so right Smitha. Money and power are a deadly combination. Thanks for dropping by😊
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Very poignant, Dahlia… We all want the same…
Much love,
David
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Thanks David
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I was busy with cricket world cup on IF and travelling. Hence the intermittent and long delays.
Coming to TankaTuesday#5, I so wish the guns to fall silent. Hope it happens soon and our kids can have a peaceful future.
Cheers..
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I understand the delays. I havent posted anything in over a week and now I am wondering if I will be able to!
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