Written for the Friday Fictioneers hosted by Rochelle – a story in 100 words or less. Click here for other stories on this prompt.
Broken Beauty
Words 100
“We have some questions Mr Kar.” Rakesh flashed his ID.
“Yes?”
“It’s over a month since your wife disappeared?”
“Yes.”
“Any messages. Calls?”
“No.”
“Any suspicions?”
“None.”
“Great garden.” Rakesh looked around. “I too like gardening.”
“Thanks.”
“That’s quite a contrast, though,” he pointed, “raw, wild and beautiful.”
“That was my wife’s space.”
“Ah.”
Rakesh stumbled over a loose stone slab.
“Careful. Let’s go back. There’re all sorts of insects, bugs, even snakes.”
“Interesting.” Rakesh bent down. “Only a couple of slabs have the prolific creeping Jenny around them.”
“Why run?” Rakesh called. “I’ll drive you to the police station.”
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Thanks for visiting. Have a wonderful week ahead!
So she is buried under the slabs. Thank you Dahlia for the post.
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Thank you Ferdi for reading and commenting 😊
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I like the look of the abandoned greenhouse. Without human interference the nature is taking over.
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Yes, it’s gorgeous! Except for the biting insects perhaps…
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I guess Mr.Kar has been rumbled.
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Indeed! 😀
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I’m not sure Rakesh is going to be driving anywhere
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Yikes! Never thought of that. 😀
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Mr Kar killed his wife and burried her in her favourite spot. Glad Rakesh figured out.
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Mr Kar was very thoughtful to place his wife in her favourite spot, although I don think she’d have appreciated being under the slab. Quick sleuthing by Rakesh. He obviously knows his botany.
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Thanks Margaret 🙂
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Elementary dear Rakesh! Nice one, Dahlia.
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Thanks so much Keith!
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Nice detecting on Rakesh’s part. Entertaining tale, Dahlia!
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Thanks Brenda!
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Loved Rakesh’s detective skills in finding the culprit of Mr.Kar’s wife. Mr.Kar thought he outsmarted everyone by burying his wife in her own favorite garden and roaming around free but couldn’t save himself from Rakesh’s naked eye which caught him in the end.
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Chinnulu
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Thanks 🙂
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Rakeshi–a good detective with a sense of humor!
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Appreciate your noticing his sense of humor! Thanks Linda for visiting
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I have a feeling the wife won’t be buried alone for too long!
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Right! Thanks for visiting 🙂
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gotcha! i suppose the husband wasn’t that smart.
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😀 Thanks for visiting and commenting
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Well, at least she’s buried in her favourite place. She probably dislodged the slabs to alert the policeman 🙂 Nice take.
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Thank you😊
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I guess it’s still her space – under the slabs. Nice one!
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Haha. Thanks 😊
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Dear Dahlia,
I hope Rakesh has backup. 😉 Mr. Kar might not give up without a fight. On the other hand, perhaps he wants to be caught. Nicely done.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thanks for your lovely comment 🙂
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Clever detective. I love it. And the dialogue.
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Thank you. Thank you😊
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Nicely done, my dear Dahlia!
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Thanks a lot Dale😊
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😊
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I love sharp detectives like Rakesh. You know when they’re on the case the killer will be found.
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Thanks so much. As an Agatha Christie fan I always wanted to try my hand at a detective story. Wasn’t sure if I pulled it off😀
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You did and very well. You are welcome 🙂
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🙏🎉🥰
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Even in 100 words your made it so cool. Well done Dahlia.
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Thanks so much Rupali🙂
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