Written for the Friday Fictioneers hosted by Rochelle – a story in 100 words or less. Click here for other stories on this prompt.

Tripped Up
Words: 98
“Where’s Mom?”
“How would I know?”
“She’s your wife too!”
“Not any longer.” He gave a snort.
“What do you mean?”
“Nothing.” He turned away and resumed packing.
“Where are you going?”
“Camping. Hiking. Boating. Barbecue.” He smacked his lips. “Why?”
“Without Mom?”
“Yeah, so?”
“Who would do all the work? You?”
“What do you mean?!”
“As if you don’t know.”
“I don’t.” His father heaved the can but couldn’t lift it. He gave up and attempted to drag it.
“Just a minute,” his son stopped him and raised the lid.
He found his mother.
Chopped into pieces.
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Oh my!
That was heart wrenching. My heart goes out to the mother who served all her life to the man, who did not think he can just get separated, instead he separated her from her beloved son.
Cheers..
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Thanks so much
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Charmer… I did not see that coming!
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Thanks!
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What just happened 😳
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The unspeakable…
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Gruesome.😱
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Grisly! I wonder what happens next. Lovely to see you back on FriFic 🙂
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Thank you Iain. It’s good to be back 🙂
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I’m not sure he thought his plan through
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Except for his son, he had it all planned out
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Oh my! That’s brutal! The writing I mean 🤣. And of course, men will be men, across all times.
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Thanks for reading!
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Wow, I wasn’t expecting that!
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Dear Dahlia,
Why do I get the feeling the son is next? Grisly ending well written.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thanks Rochelle!
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Now I wasn’t expecting that – horrific but great for Halloween weekend 🙂
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Thank you for reading and commenting 🙂
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Oh no, that took a grisly turn. ‘Tis the season for chilling spooky stories though. Well done! 🙂
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Thanks Brenda 🙂
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It was terrible for his horrendous act of separating a son from his mother.
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Oops!
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Oy! I hope he could outrun his dad! Gruesome, indeed!
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I am hoping he will nab his dad! Thanks Linda
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Ha! Nice – doesn’t anyone just get divorced any more? Great story!
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Perhaps she was the one with the money. Thanks Patricia for reading and commenting 🙂
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Wow. Well, he did all that work. Well done.
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True that 😀 Thanks for visiting and commenting.
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I hate it when that happens! Now the child will need to be axed.
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Absolutely 😂
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🙂
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Yikes!
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OMG
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