Written for the Friday Fictioneers hosted by Rochelle – a story in 100 words or less. Click here for other stories on this prompt. Thanks to Sandra for the photo 🙂

Off the Beaten Track
Words 95
“Mom!” Ravi protested, “Why did you take this road?”
“Didn’t you see the massive traffic jam on the main road?”
“Mom, main roads are always a safer bet. Here, on this track, who knows when it will clear or even whether we will reach our destination?”
“Patience Ravi, patience.” She was unperturbed. “Look, the sheep are all going the other way. In just a while, we will own the road.”
“So tell me Mom,” Ravi turned to her, “what were your objections to leaving my job in the US and taking up farming in Kerala?
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For the readers of Moonshine, here's Chapter 75 and Calvin - he never gives up trying does he?
Nicely done and now no where to run!
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😀 Thanks for reading!
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It seems Mom has settled in comfortably
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I would think she is in rather a tight spot right now – Thanks for reading and commenting!
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Loved it…Ravi latched on aptly…hope his Mom’s decision to take the road less travelled would help him too, to drive his point home…
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Thanks for reading (and latching on too)! 😀
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Clever, funny, enjoyable.
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Thanks for visiting 🙂
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Ravi was clever! I bet she didnt see this coming 🙂
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Yeah, he is a smart guy 😀 Thanks for dropping by
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Do read my take on the same prompt here. Hope you like it:)
http://3cheers-to-life.blogspot.com
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Sure will! Thanks for the link 🙂
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I hope Mum becomes reconciled to Ravi’s decision not to follow the flock.
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I don’t she has much choice now 😀 Thanks for reading and commenting 🙂
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Hello Dahlia, what is the email Id I can write to you at ?
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Hi! Here’s my mail ID – mysilverstreaks@gmail.com
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All of the sudden there is plenty of time to talk.
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Thanks for reading 🙂
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Kerala, paradise.
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Yes! Of late a number of professionally qualified and well placed engineers have taken to returning to their roots and making a success of it. A welcome trend – thank you for reading and commenting 🙂
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Dear Dahlia,
Pleasant story. I’m known for taking back roads, too. 😉
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Pleased to meet a fellow traveler 😉 Thanks for dropping by 🙂
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I guess whatever works for the individual should be the choice as everyone’s different. Good writing, Dahlia. 🙂 — Suzanne
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Thanks Suzanne 🙂
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Hahaa, great!! She is beaten in her own game!!
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Hehehe 😉
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Oh oh mommy’s in a fine pickle, now!!!
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hehhe – foot in mouth 😀
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Who is doing what, who is intending to do what is always unanswered….loved it…
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