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Into the Maelstrom
Words 151
“Exams over?”
She gave an ecstatic twirl. “I am free!”
“Free?” I queried. “But what about admissions, career…”
“None of that nonsense for me,” she dismissed with her nose in the air. “I have my future all planned.”
“Let’s hear it.”
“First college for some graduation course…”
“Which course?”
“Whatever I qualify for.”
“Okay. Next?”
“Prince Charming will find me and sweep me off my feet. I will lead him to a merry dance, before agreeing to marry him.”
“Wow.”
She smiled dreamily. “A stupendous destination wedding with both Shah Rukh and Salman Khan dancing and then go abroad for our honeymoon.”
“Where abroad?”
“Anywhere! The States to do lots of shopping.” She giggled. “Visit all the famous tourist spots, go trekking, camping, just him and me.” She clasped her hands. “It will be the most romantic time ever.”
“Nice.” I said. “And then what?
“I haven’t thought further than that.”
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Written for What Pegman Saw – a story in 150 words or less based on locations chosen from Google Maps. This week we are off to Yellowstone National Park in the US and on my bucket list. Thanks to K Rawson for hosting the challenge. To read the other stories inspired by this prompt, click here.
Perfectly depicts how kids feel after an exam or what they think of life. Lovely!
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Thanks a lot Smitha. Look forward to interacting with you🙋♀️
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Same here😊
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Ah, the ebullience of youth. I hope her dreams come true!
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I hope so too! Thanks for hosting the challenge.
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Dream away, young lady! Enjoy your feeling free – for the moment!!
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😀 Thanks Dale!
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A sweet dream! If she really marries for money she may find it’s more like hard work than she imagines! But we all daydream, don’t we? That’s a happy story and put a smile on my face, Dahlia!
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Thank you Penny, you put a smile to my face too 🙂
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PS I meant to say – I love the title!!!!
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Thanks so much for letting me know 🙂
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Dear Dahlia,
Oh romantic youth. Methinks she has a rude awakening in the years ahead. Well done.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Indeed she does – thanks Rochelle 🙂
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I can see her twirling and dancing with a smile on her face. Heck, I was that young girl once.
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Thanks for reading Alicia
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I suppose sometimes you can plan too much and then miss out! 😏
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Exactly! When you have really big dreams and expectations and things don’t work out that way it usually means trouble. Thanks Linda for visiting 🙂
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We all can say that , mirages and oasis always break if there is a slight change in weather…an Awakening and a jolt comes like a speedbreaker, but all i hope is we are strong enough to make it on any side somehow….
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Yes I hope so but the best would be not to venture into such paths unknowingly
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Well, she has it all planned out – though something tells me things might not quite go that way … Sweet tale
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I suppose not – thanks Lynn for visiting
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My pleasure 🙂
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Nicely written dreams of a teenager
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Thanks!
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It’s fine having unrealistic dreams when you’re so young 🙂 Hopefully she’ll have some fun before reality comes crashing in.
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Fingers crossed on that – thanks for reading!
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What a dream, no delusions of power, or infatuations with greed, just love. Pure unadulterated love, which hopefully she will learn to shower over everyone. What a plan. Lovely story, Dahlia!
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Thanks a lot Kelvin!
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Great capture of that elated mood. Nicely paced.
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Thank you
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LOL! If only life were like that.
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Indeed 😉 😀
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Lovely story of youth and dreams.
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Thanks Lisa, appreciate your reading 🙂
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Your dialog is always so fun, Dahlia! And your imagination! 🙂
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Ah thanks so much Theresa for your support and encouragement always 🙂
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May be the mother would say “and then reality strikes!!” 😃
Free to dream away at that age…wonder how different the dreams are for different genders…..mine dream about Harley’s and R8s 😅
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😀 And I dont even know what R8 is!!!
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I remember when I passed my O level exams I knew I was going to university for further studies. So I sailed (without my father) across the Indian Ocean and the Arabian Sea. Arrived bright eyed and bushy tailed to a strange but familiar and exciting country. I had no thoughts beyond going to college to pursue my science degree. Oh! Those were the days, happy, carefree and no thought for the future.
I have been lucky to visit the Grand Canyon, Yellowstone Park and other parks in California. First time in the 80s with my cousin and the second time 2 years ago with friends. You must visit them sometimes.
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I am so glad you are young enough to be able to identify with her 😀 And hopefully I will visit these places in this lifetime 🙂 Have a good evening Ferdi
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Thank you.Dahlia.I am only 16. I never grew up.
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😀 Mine is the reverse – I was born old, now I am growing back to 16 😀 Have a wonderful weekend 🙂
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