It Happened One Night
Words 101
“Hurry or you’ll miss the train!”
Pushing and shoving, they squeezed into the car before Grandpa drove off all by himself.
“It’s so dark and eerie.” Lilly shivered.
“Ghosts live in this jungle.” Rishi said with relish.
“Mamma!”
The car shuddered to a stop.
A blinding darkness engulfed them. Crickets shrieked. Lilly whimpered.
Grandpa opened the bonnet.
“Let me see.” A disembodied voice said.
Rishi dropped the torch.
The engine sputtered to life.
“Thank you.” Grandpa offered money.
“Money is of no use to me.” The shadow moved. “This boy…”
Gasping, Rishi threw off the crushing weight of the Unexplained Mysteries.
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Written for the Friday Fictioneers – a story in 100 words or less. Thank you Rochelle for hosting the challenge and the photo prompt. To read the other stories inspired by this prompt click here.
Thank you for reading 🙂
For readers of Moonshine, here's Chapter 140
Spooky !! Some times I feel, if I encounter a ghost, will I be able to recognize it? I haven’t seen a ghost before ( except the one in the mirror 😉 ) but I have encounter some evil spirits… 😀
BTW, I was adding mine to the linky when I saw your post. We added our links at the same time 😀
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Cool😆 off to read yours!
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I’m just a tad confused…if Grandpa drove off by himself, where are all “they” and how did he open the bonnet?
I still managed to feel spooked!
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Thanks Dale…i think you missed the “before Grandpa drove off….”
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“They squeezed into the car before Grandpa drove off ALL BY HIMSELF” – just makes it sound like they are in 2 different cars.. 😊
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Ahh..my bad. I wanted to show that if they didnt hurry Grandpa would drive off to the station just to catch d train which his grandkids were supposed to catch…an impatient man…
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Ahhh. Makes total sense. I reread the sentence. D’oh! Sometimes we read and our brain doesn’t follow… (I think it’s time for me to go to bed!) 😆
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Good night!🙆
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😴
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But it was great chatting with you😊
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Indeed! ☺
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Oh that’s scary !
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Spooky yet did not scare me much(though night will tell better) still awaiting thrillessssst one!
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Be careful of what you ask for….☻
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I got lost too. At first, I thought the kids were hiding in the car like stowaways.
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Oops…
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evil… and scary… “And the carriage held but just themselves, and immortality…” Emily Dickinson, comes to mind, along with others.
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Thanks for reading and your kind comment
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Anytime, dearest.
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I am assuming Rishi escaped the evil mystery monster? Who can also fix cars!
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Ahh I think I may have messed up somewhere – Rishi fell asleep reading Unexplained Mysteries and dreamed it all….
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Scary stuff! I like the implication that poor old Grandpa would just go off without them if they didn’t hurry and get in. I have visions of them running after him shouting “Grandpa, stop!” 🙂
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There are actually lots of people like that in my home 😀 Thanks for reading!
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Was it Rishi’s dream ? The ghosts a wonderful mechanic 👍🏻
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Yes it was! Thank you for reading 🙂
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Great spooky atmosphere!
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Thanks
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Goosebumps. I hope Rishi is still with the living. :o)
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Oh yes busy dreaming up even more delicious horror stories😊 thank you for reading
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Its frightening, yet interesting!
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Thanks 🙂
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Those unwanted shadows! Good one for the image prompt.. 🙂
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Thanks so much 🙂
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EEK!! What happened next?
You have another 101 words, starting … now!
🙂
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I need just need 3 words – He woke up 😀
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Hahaha – nice!
You’re a talented story-teller, Dahlia. 🙂
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Thanks a lot – it means a lot 🙂
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Dear Dahlia,
It took me reading through the comments to realize that Rishi was dreaming. He needs to find new reading material in any case. Scary story.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thanks Rochelle – I guess I need to revise the last sentence 🙂
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I’m glad I read the comments. Before I didn’t understand the Unexplained Mysteries. Good writing. 🙂 — Suzanne
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Oh I really do need to revise it! Thanks Suzanne😊
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A touch confusing or maybe it’s just me that is confusing:) Some of the action seemed to jerk from place to place – like Rishi in the car and then, I assume, outside holding the torch for Grandpa. The voice confused me also. Was it Grandpa’s voice out of the dark or somebody else? Still very scary and spooky. Well done.
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I definitely have to rewrite this one! Appreciate the feedback 🙂
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Hahaa… the weight of the “Unexplained mysteries” really has befuddled his brain… what an accident!!
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I am sure Lily must be relieved😜😅
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And Rishi 😜
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