Through swirling mists
I followed you
on faith alone.
When the haze lifted
I reached out and
blindfolded myself
This is another unexplored genre for me. What do you think? Did it make sense? Is the format all wrong?
In response to the Daily Post’s one-word prompt – Blindly
It flows beautifully. My interpretation was being blinded by love initially, truly not seeing, but over time learning but choosing not to see. In any case, I liked your words.
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Thank you so much! Exactly what I was trying to portray 🙂
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🙋🙋😀😀
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🙋😀
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That meant it was good and you need to post more like these 🙂🙂
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Aww thank you – but this just happened. I agonized over it before dumping it on an unsuspecting audience 😀 🙋😀 I was following Kalidas’ example in reverse
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I don’t know what is kalidas’ example nor its reverse 😂😂
But that was something which each one can relate to in life, when we blindly trust someone or something/ then we realise the truth. 😲😀😀
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You can read the story here – https://www.quora.com/What-is-the-marriage-story-of-Kalidas
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Yes ma’am 🙋
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Like Thomas, I too totally understood what you were saying! Beautifully done 😃🐻
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Thanks a lot for your encouragement 🙂
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Superb!…quite apt for the Gaandharis in all of us…beautiful choice of words
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Yay! Thank you MM 🙂
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Sometimes words cant say what you feel after reading something…after incidences, after life after death yet they fail you if you are seeing something, speechless as you say….
Thank you for the fullfillment….
Keep rising!
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Thank you Jyotsna 🙂
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It took me a while to comprehend what you meant…and then reading Thomas’ words made everything clearer 😀 So, I suppose sometimes we chose not to see because then we won’t have too many expectations…and take whatever comes our way for what it is. Brilliantly written, and that is quite a bit of fog 😀
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I think all too often we deliberately choose not to see because the truth hurts and it’s easier to live in a make-believe world. Appreciate your reading and making the effort to wade through the fog 😀
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Haha, I will only wage through fog in the imaginary world like the one here…in real life I’d be running the other way for some warmer weather 😀
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😀 Me too!
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❤
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Wow! You did great Dahlia! Nice play of words.
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Thanks Sampada – appreciate the support 🙂
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Beautiful !
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Thank you 🙂
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I don’t know anything about formats…. your words made puurrrfffectt sense to me (claps) … all about life 🙂
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Ahhh! Thankuuu 🙂
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