“What’s wrong with him?”
“He’s had a bad day.”
“Did somebody die? Is he ill?”
“The heat is killing.”
“His office is air-conditioned. We had a power cut.”
“His boss is mean to him.”
“So?”
“You don’t understand!”
“I’m listening.”
“He’s not used to being abused.”
“And you are?”
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In response to the Daily Post’s Daily Prompt – Denial and inspired by Nicola’s 50-word dialogue only story. As usual, I await your judgement with bated breath 😀
You hit the nail on the head with that last line!
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Ahh thanks Sampada – means a lot! 🙂
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😫😫😫for last two lines
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😑😑😑
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real life
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😉 😀 Thanks for reading and appreciate your comment!
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Last line shifts the whole conversation to a different level. I enjoyed it.
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Thanks a lot!
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What a telling last line… reversing the application of each reasoning completely onto herself!!
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🙂
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Spun a real twist with the last line… well done 😃😃😃
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Thanks a lot! 🙂
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Justifications are sometimes not justified and just because you justify you dont call out for HELP!
Time to blow up is nearing, thank you for a gentle reminder….Faceoff is approaching soon.
Beautiful story for an ugly reality…way to go….fabulous…
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Thank you and take care
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Wow!…just 50 words and so much conveyed…actually those 3 words to be precise..
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Thanks MM 🙂
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This is awesome. I like this. We all handle things differently. But sometimes the person who reacts in a way that shows weakness is really the strongest.
Thats what the story makes me think of. Thanks for sharing.
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Thank you for reading and appreciate sharing your perspective 🙂
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The last line packs a punch!!
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Thanks Shilpa 🙂
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